Critiques have been duly noted! (: I've been pretty busy, and am going to get even busier with my GCE's next month, but I did manage to make more HA's and practice my skills while I was on Subeta during my free time!

Hi, I love your username! Pokemon is amazing no?

I haven't been on Subeta for a long time or made a new HA for quite a while. My knowledge of the current trends are kinda hazy, but I'll try to throw out a few general critiques.

I think the first HA is the better of the two. There are a few things that bother me though. The first thing is that those eyes don't look like they have eyebrows. It's important to have eyebrows in HAs. On the runway, models sometimes have their eyebrows covered to produce a certain effect, but on HAs, it is generally a good idea to have visible eyebrows. It could be how the hair is falling, that makes it look like there are no eyebrows. Also, the hair looks pretty flat in contrast, but that hairstyle is pretty difficult to shade.

The second HA uses many sheers, which is why some of the layering looks messy. I would first take off the transparent halter, and the anklets which show through the skirt. That would reduce clutter. Then, I would just play around with it to see what else I liked.

Thanks for the critique, Ammy! I'm going to try to take care of my use of sheers from now on. (:

I haven't been on for a long time, because I started college early this January, so I've been busy transitioning into the hectic schedule of being a day scholar at college. It's fun, though! I'd like you to take a look at my current HA and critique it for me please. (: